From: Sabrina Laurent (sabrina_l_g@yahoo.fr)
Date: Fri Mar 07 2003 - 07:51:27 EST
--- In romanceconlang@yahoogroups.com, Jan van Steenbergen
<ijzeren_jan@y...> wrote:
> A wonderful piece of work, Sabrina! My congratulations (and
compliments to
> Eamon for his nice work, too)!
Thank you so much! We're both really pleased! I was nervous about
people's reactions!
> If I may allow myself to give you some suggestions:
>
> First of all, give examples. They give the reader a closer
understanding of the
> language, and a stronger feeling of familiarity with it. Besides,
lots of
> examples make a grammar always look "juicier".
>
> Secondly, I wouldn't categorize the numbers under "règles de
grammaire".
> Numbers are always the first thing I look for after finding a new
conlang
> website; in most cases, they have a header of their own (and
that's the way it
> should be :)) )
Hadn't thought of the 2nd one, but indeed i might add more examples
to give a concrete idea.
> For the rest, beautiful work! "Lo Caperucito Rogio" would be a
nice translation
> exercise for other romlangers around here, too.
>
> Ha! Yes, the vocabulary is always the tough part, eh? Wenedyk has
1,400 words
> by now, but the link to its vocabulary is still dead.
Well, Eamon's going to have to take care of it for me, so it
relies on him! But it's going to be a chore: i have over 1700 words!
I'm glad you enjoyed it and i hope the other visitors will too!
Thanks for your comments!
Sabrina
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